title is explanatory i need it for class and im garbage at poetry. doesn't matter what its abou
Last edited by SealXo (2009-02-11 18:11:08)
Inb4 uzique
you gonna regret that oneSealXo wrote:
doesn't matter what its about.
Ode to Paris Hilton wrote:
So.. no, I wouldn't hit it.
Not on a Bed.
Not on a Couch.
Not standing on my Head.
Nor standing on a Beach.
I would not hit that, No I would not.
Not with my Dick, Not with a Dick belonging to a Phish, Nor with a Phish belonging to Dick
14 linesrdx-fx wrote:
Ode to Paris Hilton wrote:
So.. no, I wouldn't hit it.
Not on a Bed.
Not on a Couch.
Not standing on my Head.
Nor standing on a Beach.
I would not hit that, No I would not.
Not with my Dick, Not with a Dick belonging to a Phish, Nor with a Phish belonging to Dick
First 7 lines can be "Buck buck buck buck booyaka shan"SealXo wrote:
14 linesrdx-fx wrote:
Ode to Paris Hilton wrote:
So.. no, I wouldn't hit it.
Not on a Bed.
Not on a Couch.
Not standing on my Head.
Nor standing on a Beach.
I would not hit that, No I would not.
Not with my Dick, Not with a Dick belonging to a Phish, Nor with a Phish belonging to Dick
Last edited by Mekstizzle (2009-02-11 17:23:32)
I found this poem at the end of the internet
While searching for porn and lulz
After only 15 minutes I was set
to retire and smoke some bowls
I often peruse with one hand in my pants
In case I happen upon some nudies
oh my god So You Think You Can Dance,
has produced some nice shots of boobies
So I sit in my room excited and lit
Hoping my parents don't catch me
I yearn for that glimpse of celebrity tit.
Time to queue up TMZ
Such is life for a teenager in two thousand and nine
This series of tubes consumes all of my time.
Sorry 5 minutes is all I'm going to waste on it.
While searching for porn and lulz
After only 15 minutes I was set
to retire and smoke some bowls
I often peruse with one hand in my pants
In case I happen upon some nudies
oh my god So You Think You Can Dance,
has produced some nice shots of boobies
So I sit in my room excited and lit
Hoping my parents don't catch me
I yearn for that glimpse of celebrity tit.
Time to queue up TMZ
Such is life for a teenager in two thousand and nine
This series of tubes consumes all of my time.
Sorry 5 minutes is all I'm going to waste on it.
Last edited by KEN-JENNINGS (2009-02-11 17:24:48)
Pretty much epicKEN-JENNINGS wrote:
I found this poem at the end of the internet
While searching for porn and lulz
After only 15 minutes I was set
to retire and smoke some bowls
I often peruse with one hand in my pants
In case I happen upon some nudies
oh my god So You Think You Can Dance,
has produced some nice shots of boobies
So I sit in my room excited and lit
Hoping my parents don't catch me
I yearn for that glimpse of celebrity tit.
Time to queue up TMZ
Such is life for a teenager in two thousand and nine
This series of tubes consumes all of my time.
if thats original im using that.ColCarnage wrote:
Pretty much epicKEN-JENNINGS wrote:
I found this poem at the end of the internet
While searching for porn and lulz
After only 15 minutes I was set
to retire and smoke some bowls
I often peruse with one hand in my pants
In case I happen upon some nudies
oh my god So You Think You Can Dance,
has produced some nice shots of boobies
So I sit in my room excited and lit
Hoping my parents don't catch me
I yearn for that glimpse of celebrity tit.
Time to queue up TMZ
Such is life for a teenager in two thousand and nine
This series of tubes consumes all of my time.
OG as Tookie Williams.
Ken your 'sonnet' is not a Sonnet, it doesn't scan or fit the metre/structure.
Do you need a Shakespearean sonnet or a Petrarchan sonnet? Two very different things...
Do you need a Shakespearean sonnet or a Petrarchan sonnet? Two very different things...
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shakesUzique wrote:
Ken your 'sonnet' is not a Sonnet, it doesn't scan or fit the metre/structure.
Do you need a Shakespearean sonnet or a Petrarchan sonnet? Two very different things...
I knew the meter was off, don't really know the structure. All I remember is Shakespeare-type - ababcdcdefefggUzique wrote:
Ken your 'sonnet' is not a Sonnet, it doesn't scan or fit the metre/structure.
Do you need a Shakespearean sonnet or a Petrarchan sonnet? Two very different things...
Like I said, didn't want to waste too much time. Oh well.
Typical English sonnet-form is just the bog-standard 'English language verse' meter, iambic pentameter. Pretty much synonymous with Shakespeare.
But yes, because of structure+scansion+creative effort, this is a lot to ask. A sonnet isn't a wanky limerick that you rap off the top of your head, it actually takes real effort and thought to create. Good luck finding someone with the time (and talent) to do that
But yes, because of structure+scansion+creative effort, this is a lot to ask. A sonnet isn't a wanky limerick that you rap off the top of your head, it actually takes real effort and thought to create. Good luck finding someone with the time (and talent) to do that
Last edited by Uzique (2009-02-11 18:19:16)
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shiet.....
yea hit needs to be 5 "syllables"
i dont care if its great i just need SOMETHING
yea hit needs to be 5 "syllables"
i dont care if its great i just need SOMETHING
Last edited by SealXo (2009-02-11 18:24:56)
Haha err yes, iambic pentameter...
Penta-meter, 5 feet per line, in more basic terms, 5 'syllables' per line yes although technically a foot is a bit more complex than that.
Iambic, i.e. consisting of iambs - an iamb is one of the metrical feet that has an unstressed (~) and then stressed (`) syllable.
E.g. Shall I compare thee to a summer's day...
Shakespearean sonnets are typically a masculine metre, i.e. ending in a strong stressed syllable as opposed to the weaker (feminine ) foot.
Have fun composing
Penta-meter, 5 feet per line, in more basic terms, 5 'syllables' per line yes although technically a foot is a bit more complex than that.
Iambic, i.e. consisting of iambs - an iamb is one of the metrical feet that has an unstressed (~) and then stressed (`) syllable.
E.g. Shall I compare thee to a summer's day...
Shakespearean sonnets are typically a masculine metre, i.e. ending in a strong stressed syllable as opposed to the weaker (feminine ) foot.
Have fun composing
Last edited by Uzique (2009-02-11 18:27:00)
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I remember writing several back in 10th grade. Lemme see if I can find one
once upon a midnight dreary, while i pron surfed, weak and weary, over many a strange and spurious site of ' hot xxx galore'. While i clicked my fav'rite bookmark, suddenly there came a warning, and my heart was filled with mourning, mourning for my dear amour, " 'Tis not possible!", i muttered, " give me back my free hardcore!"..... quoth the server, 404.
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I remember writing several back in 10th grade. Lemme see if I can find one
bad news. All my school data is on DVDs at my parents house. ):
once upon a midnight dreary, while i pron surfed, weak and weary, over many a strange and spurious site of ' hot xxx galore'. While i clicked my fav'rite bookmark, suddenly there came a warning, and my heart was filled with mourning, mourning for my dear amour, " 'Tis not possible!", i muttered, " give me back my free hardcore!"..... quoth the server, 404.
dommit frank
I never thought I'd need it again. I'm trying hard to repress the memories from that class
*shudder*
*shudder*
once upon a midnight dreary, while i pron surfed, weak and weary, over many a strange and spurious site of ' hot xxx galore'. While i clicked my fav'rite bookmark, suddenly there came a warning, and my heart was filled with mourning, mourning for my dear amour, " 'Tis not possible!", i muttered, " give me back my free hardcore!"..... quoth the server, 404.
lol I'm doing poetry in class as well.
just learned that last semester. fun stuff.Uzique wrote:
Haha err yes, iambic pentameter...
Penta-meter, 5 feet per line, in more basic terms, 5 'syllables' per line yes although technically a foot is a bit more complex than that.
Iambic, i.e. consisting of iambs - an iamb is one of the metrical feet that has an unstressed (~) and then stressed (`) syllable.
E.g. Shall I compare thee to a summer's day...
Shakespearean sonnets are typically a masculine metre, i.e. ending in a strong stressed syllable as opposed to the weaker (feminine ) foot.
Have fun composing
best grade i ever got in her class tbh.
"people in ny have a general idea of how to drive. one of the pedals goes forward the other one prevents you from dying"
- Superior Mind
- (not macbeth)
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And you'll never get better without doing it yourself. Dig deep, brah. Try writing a free form poem first, then morph in into sonnet form.SealXo wrote:
im garbage at poetry.
i can do poetry, this just has to many rules i cant be creative.Superior Mind wrote:
And you'll never get better without doing it yourself. Dig deep, brah. Try writing a free form poem first, then morph in into sonnet form.SealXo wrote:
im garbage at poetry.
All 'proper' poetry has rules, all 'proper' poetry has a form, a structure and a metre... just like the Sonnet. Just because you can string together a few nursery-school rhyming couplets in a pretentiously-arty free verse structure, doesn't make it poetry. Writing to metre and conforming to a backbone structure is one of the main skills demanded in poetry.
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