Noes! I dun liek it!! I doesnt feel like an urban map from those screens to me Im afraid, What I would like to see happen is someone makes some Industrial China type urban maps, for all you mappers out there who have BF2:MC, Bridge Too Far, make a port of that game or get some ideas from it
I think I might have a crack at it!
Back to the current map
You dont want this map looking like Jalalabad [Is it to La's or one!?] which is just a bunch of random urban buildings thrown together, I havent looked into this, but try looking at light shading or whatever, you know how the hotel on karkand is a really nice orange and on some other maps it features in its dull greyish [Jallalalalalabad]
Try and find a unique industrial point, remember you dont have to make an assload of grass for it to be chinese either, think Industrial China, ashpaut, stuff like that, or think, china town style, rows of houses, with things hanging between, in a grey/red/yellow enviroment