UnknownRanger
Squirrels, natures little speedbump.
+610|6781|Cali


+1's all around please i worked preety hard on this thing.

btw this is my firts video plz give me constructive critacism.

Last edited by UnknownRanger (2006-12-17 23:49:59)

Towelly
It's A State Of Mind
+399|7027|Your attic
Was that a joke?

If not a few things.

1) The music @ ~ 2:45 made me die, I watched no more (I don't know why I watched that much)
2) Showing yourself die in and go back to the exact same place and die again does not make for a good video
3) Have you heard of 1st person?

Last edited by Towelly (2006-12-17 18:22:07)

MorbiD.ShoT
Stormin' through the party
+322|7032

UnknownRanger wrote:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mAwu1msrYv4

+1's all around please i worked preety hard on this thing.

btw this is my firts video plz give me constructive critacism.
I turned it off as soon as Drowning Pool - Let the Bodies Hit the Floor came on.

Sick son of a bitch.  I actually had to run outside and throw up.

Last edited by MorbiD.ShoT (2006-12-17 18:26:59)

Hyper
Banned
+154|7187
wtf is amature?
Flonster
Karma Ratio whore
+178|6983|-removed you know why- mod
lame.

you found your left mouse button... awesome... no u can throw grenades...
UnknownRanger
Squirrels, natures little speedbump.
+610|6781|Cali
k i thought i said consdctive critacism, but w/e "lame" will work JACKASS.
ssj3barua
Member
+55|7125|Indianapolis, IN, U.S.
That was so bad I think it gave me cancer.
justice
OctoPoster
+978|7177|OctoLand
Stunning video dude! Credit where credit is due, simply out of this world!
I know fucking karate
Paco_the_Insane
Phorum Phantom
+244|7081|Ohio
sorry dude, that was not that good.

it would have been better in first person, and if you didnt die so much.

and better music would be a plus.
UnknownRanger
Squirrels, natures little speedbump.
+610|6781|Cali

justice wrote:

Stunning video dude! Credit where credit is due, simply out of this world!
finally a nice person, even kno i think he is lieing. thx
Fancy_Pollux
Connoisseur of Fine Wine
+1,306|7082
awesome video!

+1
l41e
Member
+677|7084

Cut the parts where he's dead.
Cut the parts where he spawns.
Cut the damn music. I don't want to hear "Let The Bodies Hit the Floor" one more single time in my life.
Cut the spawn screens. We already know what the US default weapons are. (?!)
I{endo
Member
+20|6853|berlin

Fancy_Pollux wrote:

awesome video!

+1
UnknownRanger
Squirrels, natures little speedbump.
+610|6781|Cali

k30dxedle wrote:

Cut the parts where he's dead.
Cut the parts where he spawns.
Cut the damn music. I don't want to hear "Let The Bodies Hit the Floor" one more single time in my life.
Cut the spawn screens. We already know what the US default weapons are. (?!)
like i said this is my first video.

Last edited by UnknownRanger (2006-12-17 18:43:41)

Jestar
Shifty's Home Number: 02 9662 8432
+373|7177

And it was Shit.
Flaming_Maniac
prince of insufficient light
+2,490|7143|67.222.138.85

Jestar12345 wrote:

And it was Shit.
The shit.
4_Phucsache
Property of BF2s©
+112|7019|Brisbane Australia
I went and had a smoke come back and you were still dead/respawning was it lag or did you just die heaps?

On a serious note, look into some vid editing tutorials online. There are heaps around and it makes for easier viewing (and less flaming) if people dont have to sit and watch through you spawning again.

As for music well I dont know the song anyway so Im not in a postion to say anything about it other than the style which aint my cup of tea but nevermind.

Finally never NEVER EVER post something on here and ask for "constructive" criticism.

Cheers.
ikillyou9090
Member
+24|6984
LOL. " the best bf2 player ever!"

yet the title says amateur..


go back outside.
FoShizzle
Howdah Lysozyme
+21|7063|Pittsburgh, PA

Jestar12345 wrote:

And it was Shit.
FLMAO
autopilot
banned
+115|6784

Best video ever! +1!!

I am flabbergasted[coor=#383838] but I am not sure if that is a good thing...[/color]
Fredrik
i hate you all
+201|7085|Norway

autopilot wrote:

Best video ever! +1!!

I am flabbergasted[coor=#383838] but I am not sure if that is a good thing...[/color]
I think you may have left a L there^^
Hyper
Banned
+154|7187

Fredrik wrote:

autopilot wrote:

Best video ever! +1!!

I am flabbergasted[coor=#383838] but I am not sure if that is a good thing...[/color]
I think you may have left a L there^^
thats cos hes fabergasted!
Yaocelotl
:D
+221|7086|Keyboard
No offense but you need to play minesweeper.
-TL-
Srs lurker
+25|6929|Oklahoma City
Did you do anything besides throw 'nades and die?  Oh wait, you did, you stared at the respawn screen for half the video!
UnknownRanger
Squirrels, natures little speedbump.
+610|6781|Cali

Yaocelotl wrote:

No offense but you need to play minesweeper.
NEVER

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