Firstly: Wrong forum.
Not at all bad. I don't know what criteria you're being graded on, so I don't know how much help any of this will be, but here's my thoughts:
1. where's the ceiling?
2. the texturing is very flat.
3. the modelling is ok.
4. the animation lacks a certain 'something' - it's very stiff and the way the pieces move is very 'unnatural'.
5. the cut to the white king near the end is a little sharp and disorienting - might be better if the camera was slightly further back so you could see the black king 'in-shot'?
6. is it wise to state that you used stolen software in the credits? (if I read them correctly)
Last edited by Scorpion0x17 (2007-04-01 19:01:03)