Right, thing is, I wanna write a novel. And I want people to read it as I write it. So, the idea is, that I write it out on here, (in a different post, maybe) and you guys read it as I write each day, and give me constructive critcism. This cool, or should I give up now?
Go for it
I wanna be a character for having the first reply though.
I wanna be a character for having the first reply though.
It's hard to critique a story with the plot, events and conclusion in sections. But it might help you. What sort of story do you have in mind?
Last edited by TheAussieReaper (2007-12-20 15:28:30)
About a teenager and a shit life, lots of swearing, possibly some guns, and some cars. FFlink, what's your real name, and maybe..
Even if BF2s tells you to get lost... if you want to write one then do it (you'll be able to publish someplace.... even a real book!!!)
but I guess by "I wanna write a novel" you haven't planned out a story or tried to write the first chapter yet so no point in worrying... if you get that far your doing way better than most.
Plan, write some, post (here or elsewhere) and then see.....
Have fun with it.
but I guess by "I wanna write a novel" you haven't planned out a story or tried to write the first chapter yet so no point in worrying... if you get that far your doing way better than most.
Plan, write some, post (here or elsewhere) and then see.....
Have fun with it.
Last edited by KylieTastic (2007-12-20 15:29:18)
MarcFunky_Finny wrote:
About a teenager and a shit life, lots of swearing, possibly some guns, and some cars. FFlink, what's your real name, and maybe..
I've got an idea in my head... see the above post.. and I know how my first chapter will go..KylieTastic wrote:
Even if BF"s tells you to get lost... if you want to write one then do it (you'll be able to publish someplace.... even a real book!!!)
but I guess by "I wanna write a novel" you haven't planned out a story or tried to write the first chapter yet so no point in worrying... if you get that far your doing way better than most.
Plan, write some, post (here or elsewhere) and then see.....
Have fun with it.
Marc, fucking perfect, karmaz for me if you get famous.FFLink13 wrote:
Marc
Last edited by Funky_Finny (2007-12-20 15:30:01)
No, you're a liar, it's Kevin.FFLink13 wrote:
MarcFunky_Finny wrote:
About a teenager and a shit life, lots of swearing, possibly some guns, and some cars. FFlink, what's your real name, and maybe..
mwahahaha.
"people in ny have a general idea of how to drive. one of the pedals goes forward the other one prevents you from dying"
You don't know me in the slightest.haffeysucks wrote:
No, you're a liar, it's Kevin.FFLink13 wrote:
MarcFunky_Finny wrote:
About a teenager and a shit life, lots of swearing, possibly some guns, and some cars. FFlink, what's your real name, and maybe..
mwahahaha.
What activated bitch mode? Christ.FFLink13 wrote:
You don't know me in the slightest.haffeysucks wrote:
No, you're a liar, it's Kevin.FFLink13 wrote:
Marc
mwahahaha.
"people in ny have a general idea of how to drive. one of the pedals goes forward the other one prevents you from dying"
Right, so it's settled, tomorrow, I'll start writing.
Oh God, do I really have to put a "" after everyone of my posts, just to say it's in jest?haffeysucks wrote:
What activated bitch mode? Christ.FFLink13 wrote:
You don't know me in the slightest.haffeysucks wrote:
No, you're a liar, it's Kevin.
mwahahaha.
It was supposed to be serious, but funny!
And see! You don't know me! People who do know I don't often say bad things about people.
There's a lesson for you...
Last edited by FFLink13 (2007-12-20 15:33:32)
Yes, asshole.FFLink13 wrote:
Oh God, do I really have to put a "" after everyone of my posts, just to say it's in jest?haffeysucks wrote:
What activated bitch mode? Christ.FFLink13 wrote:
You don't know me in the slightest.
"people in ny have a general idea of how to drive. one of the pedals goes forward the other one prevents you from dying"
aye, i'm a tad drunk and typin so slow you'd already moved on and posted itFunky_Finny wrote:
I've got an idea in my head... see the above post.. and I know how my first chapter will go..KylieTastic wrote:
Even if BF"s tells you to get lost... if you want to write one then do it (you'll be able to publish someplace.... even a real book!!!)
but I guess by "I wanna write a novel" you haven't planned out a story or tried to write the first chapter yet so no point in worrying... if you get that far your doing way better than most.
Plan, write some, post (here or elsewhere) and then see.....
Have fun with it.
That's the way to go!KylieTastic wrote:
aye, i'm a tad drunk and typin so slow you'd already moved on and posted itFunky_Finny wrote:
I've got an idea in my head... see the above post.. and I know how my first chapter will go..KylieTastic wrote:
Even if BF"s tells you to get lost... if you want to write one then do it (you'll be able to publish someplace.... even a real book!!!)
but I guess by "I wanna write a novel" you haven't planned out a story or tried to write the first chapter yet so no point in worrying... if you get that far your doing way better than most.
Plan, write some, post (here or elsewhere) and then see.....
Have fun with it.
Anyway, for tonight, ladies, goodnight.
You mean typing. Good luck and make sure you have fun doing it.Funky_Finny wrote:
Right, so it's settled, tomorrow, I'll start writing.
Can I be in the story?
Go for it dude. Writing is loads of fun. It's also good to have a bunch of reliable proofreaders. I use one of my best friends for that, but as a reward I had to give him a role in the story too
"If you want a vision of the future, imagine SecuROM slapping your face with its dick -- forever." -George Orwell
Hey, I'm an awesome proofreader. I'm emazing at grammer and stuf.LaidBackNinja wrote:
Go for it dude. Writing is loads of fun. It's also good to have a bunch of reliable proofreaders. I use one of my best friends for that, but as a reward I had to give him a role in the story too
(But no, really, I'm a grammar guru. )
"people in ny have a general idea of how to drive. one of the pedals goes forward the other one prevents you from dying"
You can be the bad guy, Freezer is the goodieRyan wrote:
Can I be in the story?
I can't type stories, I write them first, then type...TheAussieReaper wrote:
You mean typing. Good luck and make sure you have fun doing it.Funky_Finny wrote:
Right, so it's settled, tomorrow, I'll start writing.
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