Feedback on program please

2008-01-23 16:23:42

#1

CanadianLoser: Meow :3 :3; +1,148|6993

download version 1 here

version 2.0:
-forgot to compile at school so i couldn't make a .exe file to upload for you guys, Doh!
-changed colours (still ugly, i know...oh well)
-added headings over translations
-added pictures on bottom right
-changed some grammar for translations
-didn't have time to change international characters to work because i had to hand it in today

https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/1337-1337/111.jpg

https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/1337-1337/222.jpg

https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/1337-1337/333.jpg

https://i58.photobucket.com/albums/g270/1337-1337/444.jpg

from the thread
here http://forums.bf2s.com/viewtopic.php?id=90046 i have finally finished the project and was looking for feedback.

it takes 2 seconds to download and run. It is a program i made for my computer sciences class...it sucks, i know, but was wondering if there is anything I should change, add, or get rid of, or spelling/grammar corrections.

thanks for all the help guys (especially Zimmer)! It was much appreciated!

-canadian

Last edited by Canadianloser (2008-01-24 07:41:05)

2008-01-23 16:24:51

#2

SamTheMan:D: Banned; +856|6460|England

IT SUCKS!

Sorry I couldn't resist. Will dl now and tell you

EDIT: Seems it be working fine and could be very helpful.

I liked the .exe icon too

Last edited by SamTheMan:D (2008-01-23 16:27:21)

2008-01-23 16:28:25

#3

CanadianLoser: Meow :3 :3; +1,148|6993

SamTheMan:D wrote:
IT SUCKS!

Sorry I couldn't resist. Will dl now and tell you

EDIT: Seems it be working fine and could be very helpful.

I liked the .exe icon too

i though you might

2008-01-23 16:31:49

#4

aimless: Member; +166|6610|Texas

The "Select the Language" titles are kind of bright.

2008-01-23 16:32:58

#5

alexb: <3; +590|6425|Kentucky, USA

Would be nice if you added a cooler theme!

2008-01-23 16:33:58

#6

CanadianLoser: Meow :3 :3; +1,148|6993

alexbay13 wrote:
Would be nice if you added a cooler theme!

what do you mean? different colours?

2008-01-23 16:39:15

#7

alexb: <3; +590|6425|Kentucky, USA

Yeah, besides the color what seemed like Teal to my eyes. Awesum application though.

2008-01-23 16:40:47

#8

Zimmer: Un Moderador; +1,688|7242|Scotland

2 errors so far in Spanish translation.

Second page.
"pro"
and
"hable"

Should be "por" and "habla".

In the french. "sorry", in English context, should be "pardon". Not "desole". That means "I am sorry for blah".

2008-01-23 16:43:04

#9

avman633: Member; +116|6850

Zimmer wrote:
2 errors so far in Spanish translation.

Second page.
"pro"
and
"hable"

Should be "por" and "habla".

In the french. "sorry", in English context, should be "pardon". Not "desole". That means "I am sorry for blah".

Wow, you are very proficient in language

2008-01-23 16:45:19

#10

some_random_panda: Flamesuit essential; +454|6876

avman633 wrote:
Zimmer wrote:
2 errors so far in Spanish translation.

Second page.
"pro"
and
"hable"

Should be "por" and "habla".

In the french. "sorry", in English context, should be "pardon". Not "desole". That means "I am sorry for blah".
Wow, you are very proficient in language

Zimmer's title wrote:
The Spanish Mod

2008-01-23 16:57:16

#11

Zimmer: Un Moderador; +1,688|7242|Scotland

Meh. I speak french as well.

Ok, problems with the french. These are the fixes.

How are you? - Ca va? ( c cedilla )
I am well - Oui, ca va / Ca va bien

My name is - Je m'appelle [name]
What is your name? - Comment vous appelez? / Vous appelez comment?
How much does this cost? - C'est combien?
I would like a coffee - Un cafe, s'il vous plait
I would like a ticket - Un billet, s'il vous plait
Do you speak english? - Parlez-vous l'anglais? / Vous parlez l'anglais?
I do not speak french - Je ne parle pas le francais

Should be all the problems. Whoever did french took it straight off Google Translate.

2008-01-24 07:26:59

#12

CanadianLoser: Meow :3 :3; +1,148|6993

edit: edited op

version 2.0

didn't have time to change the code so it would accept the international characters because i had to hand it in today.

thanks for all the help guys (especially Zimmer)!

Last edited by Canadianloser (2008-01-24 07:36:37)

2008-01-24 07:32:16

#13

kylef: Gone; +1,352|6979|N. Ireland

Zimmer wrote:
My name is - Je m'appelle [name]
What is your name? - Comment vous appelez? / Vous appelez comment?
How much does this cost? - C'est combien?
I would like a coffee - Un cafe, s'il vous plait
I would like a ticket - Un billet, s'il vous plait
Do you speak english? - Parlez-vous l'anglais? / Vous parlez l'anglais?
I do not speak french - Je ne parle pas le francais

Should be all the problems. Whoever did french took it straight off Google Translate.

"Technically" I would like a coffee would be "J'aimerais un cafe" ("me gustaria" spanish equiv.)

2008-01-24 08:18:25

#14

Funky_Finny: Banned; +456|6618|Carnoustie, Scotland

Zimmer wrote:
Meh. I speak french as well.

Ok, problems with the french. These are the fixes.

How are you? - Ca va? ( c cedilla )
I am well - Oui, ca va / Ca va bien

My name is - Je m'appelle [name]
What is your name? - Comment vous appelez? / Vous appelez comment?
How much does this cost? - C'est combien?
I would like a coffee - Un cafe, s'il vous plait
I would like a ticket - Un billet, s'il vous plait
Do you speak english? - Parlez-vous l'anglais? / Vous parlez l'anglais?
I do not speak french - Je ne parle pas le francais

Should be all the problems. Whoever did french took it straight off Google Translate.

Don't forget formal/informal for do you speak french

2008-01-24 11:24:49

#15

kylef: Gone; +1,352|6979|N. Ireland

Funky_Finny wrote:
Don't forget formal/informal for do you speak french

Fine.. Comment t'appelle tu?

2008-01-24 11:45:47

#16

hawaythelads: We are PREMIER LEAGUE!; +84|6972|Newcastle Upon Tyne.

wont work for me...

https://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f183/timalam/iwq6Ctmp.jpg

2008-01-24 11:47:20

#17

Zimmer: Un Moderador; +1,688|7242|Scotland

Funky_Finny wrote:
Zimmer wrote:
Meh. I speak french as well.

Ok, problems with the french. These are the fixes.

How are you? - Ca va? ( c cedilla )
I am well - Oui, ca va / Ca va bien

My name is - Je m'appelle [name]
What is your name? - Comment vous appelez? / Vous appelez comment?
How much does this cost? - C'est combien?
I would like a coffee - Un cafe, s'il vous plait
I would like a ticket - Un billet, s'il vous plait
Do you speak english? - Parlez-vous l'anglais? / Vous parlez l'anglais?
I do not speak french - Je ne parle pas le francais

Should be all the problems. Whoever did french took it straight off Google Translate.
Don't forget formal/informal for do you speak french

No. This is for tourists. If you go about with "tu", you will seriously offend the Frenchies out there. Don't even go there. It isn't needed for a tourist in france.

2008-01-24 11:57:06

#18

..teddy..jimmy: Member; +1,393|7135

Zimmer wrote:
Meh. I speak french as well.

Ok, problems with the french. These are the fixes.

How are you? - Ca va? ( c cedilla )
I am well - Oui, ca va / Ca va bien

My name is - Je m'appelle [name]
What is your name? - Comment vous appelez? / Vous appelez comment?
How much does this cost? - C'est combien?
I would like a coffee - Un cafe, s'il vous plait
I would like a ticket - Un billet, s'il vous plait
Do you speak english? - Parlez-vous l'anglais? / Vous parlez l'anglais?
I do not speak french - Je ne parle pas le francais

Should be all the problems. Whoever did french took it straight off Google Translate.

You don't need feminine/masculine articles in the two last ones..

Can be either Parlez-vous anglais? or vous parlez anglais?-depends in what context you're asked.

Similarly, you don't say Je ne parle pas le francais- je ne parle pas francais

2008-01-24 12:05:58

#19

^*AlphA*^: F*ckers; +3,135|7224|The Hague, Netherlands

and delete the Gott thing with German, replace it with "Hallo"

for the rest, looks good.

https://bf3s.com/sigs/36eac2cb6af70a43508fd8d1c93d3201f4e23435.png

2008-01-24 12:20:52

#20

Zimmer: Un Moderador; +1,688|7242|Scotland

..teddy..jimmy wrote:
Zimmer wrote:
Meh. I speak french as well.

Ok, problems with the french. These are the fixes.

How are you? - Ca va? ( c cedilla )
I am well - Oui, ca va / Ca va bien

My name is - Je m'appelle [name]
What is your name? - Comment vous appelez? / Vous appelez comment?
How much does this cost? - C'est combien?
I would like a coffee - Un cafe, s'il vous plait
I would like a ticket - Un billet, s'il vous plait
Do you speak english? - Parlez-vous l'anglais? / Vous parlez l'anglais?
I do not speak french - Je ne parle pas le francais

Should be all the problems. Whoever did french took it straight off Google Translate.
You don't need feminine/masculine articles in the two last ones..

Can be either Parlez-vous anglais? or vous parlez anglais?-depends in what context you're asked.

Similarly, you don't say Je ne parle pas le francais- je ne parle pas francais

Never said you did, but you can have it there. Some say it, some don't.

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