MAGUIRE93
High Angle Hell
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“I Have a Dream”

I have a dream,
No prejudice is the theme,
He said let freedom ring,
By Martian Luther King.

Let’s not be prejudged,
By the color of our skin,
Let us be judged,
By the character from within.

We hold these truths to be self-evident;
This is what he meant,
That all men are created equal,
That was actual.

This was a great dream,
But as it would seem,
Not everyone believed in what he had to say,
Not even to this day.


i'm not a great poet what do you think?
White-Fusion
Fuck
+616|7033|Scotland
That was very well done.
Ryan
Member
+1,230|7324|Alberta, Canada

Is it supposed to say Martian Luther King?
SgtSlutter
Banned
+550|7119|Amsterdam, NY

White-Fusion wrote:

That was very well done.
MAGUIRE93
High Angle Hell
+182|6675|Schofield Barracks

Ryan wrote:

Is it supposed to say Martian Luther King?
I made a spelling error didn't I?
Luigi
Sniper Whore
+97|6660|Wisconsin

MAGUIRE93 wrote:

Ryan wrote:

Is it supposed to say Martian Luther King?
I made a spelling error didn't I?
yes, yes you did
good job though
MAGUIRE93
High Angle Hell
+182|6675|Schofield Barracks

LuigiMcOwnage wrote:

MAGUIRE93 wrote:

Ryan wrote:

Is it supposed to say Martian Luther King?
I made a spelling error didn't I?
yes, yes you did
good job though
Please explain the error. Did i add an extra letter?
Ryan
Member
+1,230|7324|Alberta, Canada

MAGUIRE93 wrote:

LuigiMcOwnage wrote:

MAGUIRE93 wrote:


I made a spelling error didn't I?
yes, yes you did
good job though
Please explain the error. Did i add an extra letter?
Yes, it's Martin Luther King, not Martian.
If it were Martian, he'd be from planet Mars.
Surgeons
U shud proabbly f off u fat prik
+3,097|6970|Gogledd Cymru

Martin, not Martian, nice nevertheless.

Although it was a bit pedantic.
MAGUIRE93
High Angle Hell
+182|6675|Schofield Barracks

Ryan wrote:

MAGUIRE93 wrote:

LuigiMcOwnage wrote:


yes, yes you did
good job though
Please explain the error. Did i add an extra letter?
Yes, it's Martin Luther King, not Martian.
If it were Martian, he'd be from planet Mars.
Thanks for saving my ass from my crazy teacher.
Ty
Mass Media Casualty
+2,401|7255|Noizyland

If I had to write
A poem for Social Studies
I would write haiku
[Blinking eyes thing]
Steam: http://steamcommunity.com/id/tzyon
DesertFox-
The very model of a modern major general
+796|7166|United States of America
Did anyone else think the words sounded more like a rap song than a poem? That's just how I read it from the beginning...
KEN-JENNINGS
I am all that is MOD!
+2,993|7113|949

I thought it was well done.  I am an MLK fanboi too, so kudos to you.

DesertFox- wrote:

Did anyone else think the words sounded more like a rap song than a poem? That's just how I read it from the beginning...
That would be Biggie-

"It was all a dream,
I used to read Word Up Magazine,
Salt 'n' Pepa Heavy D up in the limousine..."

Last edited by KEN-JENNINGS (2008-02-25 17:08:02)

Gooners
Wiki Contributor
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Well Done.
firebolt5
Member
+114|6636
I admit, that was pretty good.
MAGUIRE93
High Angle Hell
+182|6675|Schofield Barracks
dayum thanks guys.
i thought it was good but not as good as you guys are syain.
HurricaИe
Banned
+877|6442|Washington DC
It's good, since it's not for English ignore the following:

-Slant rhyme annoys me

-Try to keep consistent meter

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