Ok guys, I finished my poem, tell me what you think.
This world of ours is so unfair
It isn’t so nice, it can be brutal
We live all alone, sometimes in despair
Sometimes we are lost, or even futile.
It is hard to look through the dark clouds
To see the sunlight that is cast on our Earth
This lovely ground, turned to grey, covered by a shroud
Maybe it will clear, sun will flood, there will be rebirth.
When I look around, I only see sadness
Could this be a sign, we may never know
I stare at people who only look careless
I want a change, for the world to be mellow.
The world is slowly rotting, just as are we
I love this world, but it will soon be gone, nothing to see.
This world of ours is so unfair
It isn’t so nice, it can be brutal
We live all alone, sometimes in despair
Sometimes we are lost, or even futile.
It is hard to look through the dark clouds
To see the sunlight that is cast on our Earth
This lovely ground, turned to grey, covered by a shroud
Maybe it will clear, sun will flood, there will be rebirth.
When I look around, I only see sadness
Could this be a sign, we may never know
I stare at people who only look careless
I want a change, for the world to be mellow.
The world is slowly rotting, just as are we
I love this world, but it will soon be gone, nothing to see.
