I need your opinion...

2008-04-28 15:12:46

#1

Graphic-J: The Artist formerly known as GraphicArtist-J; +196|6598|So Cal

I'm no web designer but I know a little. This is a temporary site until i have my official site up and running.
Tell me what you think and give me pointers if you have any. I know there are some good Web designers out there, so give me a heads up. What do you think?.... www.jgraphicdesigns.net
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https://i89.photobucket.com/albums/k202/joshuame505/JGDAvatar.jpg

2008-04-28 15:14:24

#2

Mekstizzle: WALKER; +3,611|7093|London, England

Very nice, although the blue tint doesn't really go well. Perhaps more of a rust/orange tint would go better (suit the awesome background abit better). Also, the links at the top could do with a lick of paint.

Last edited by Mek-Stizzle (2008-04-28 15:14:39)

2008-04-28 15:16:30

#3

N00bkilla55404: Voices are calling...; +136|6403|Somewhere out in Space

hai pbf

Mek-Stizzle wrote:
Very nice, although the blue tint doesn't really go well. Perhaps more of a rust/orange tint would go better (suit the awesome background abit better). Also, the links at the top could do with a lick of paint.

Thought the same actually.

Last edited by N00bkilla55404 (2008-04-28 15:17:19)

2008-04-28 15:19:53

#4

Graphic-J: The Artist formerly known as GraphicArtist-J; +196|6598|So Cal

"hai pbf"
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HA! Hey fellow pbf-er.

2008-04-29 10:42:40

#5

Graphic-J: The Artist formerly known as GraphicArtist-J; +196|6598|So Cal

Thanks for the input. I will keep that in mind.

2008-04-29 10:45:58

#6

jsnipy: ...; +3,277|6994|...

Tint that metal with the blue from your logo, replace that dark gray with a sampling of a color from the background.

Sample your css colors from you logo to tie in.

That finial thing at the bottom is ok if you are going for an eclectic look, but you would need some things -- i'd suggest taking it around or taking emphasis off it it by reducing its contrast.

Last edited by jsnipy (2008-04-29 10:48:13)

2008-04-29 10:54:03

#7

d.Luxe: Banned; +64|6323

The ad at the top does not fit the title of the site.

Other than that, the page design is nice. The gallery is bugged for me though. I don't like the background. Try to take out the outerglow of the logo.

Looks like you're going to make money

2008-04-29 11:01:56

#8

Vilham: Say wat!?; +580|7238|UK

Looks good, very image heavy though, was quite slow to load for me. Also agree with the others, change the background. Otherwise its very good.

2008-04-29 14:36:47

#9

OmniDeath: ~; +726|7115

Not bad, but the "theme" isn't consistent. Glowing futuristic text and the a worn metal background? And that flourish at the bottom... just some minor things, pretty slick overall.

2008-04-29 17:58:23

#10

Ender2309: has joined the GOP; +470|7043|USA

pagemaker is a single word, if you're talking about the adobe product.

2008-04-29 20:23:01

#11

**LiLp-DeFiNeD: Banned; +54|6626|Vancouver, BC, Canada

Metal BG seems out of place, change it, as others have said.

Personally, I'd get rid of the metal, and tint it greener(not turqoise)

www.thegreendonkey.com

Kinda shows what i like though *-)

(On MSN *-) = shitty eye roll)

2008-04-29 21:44:52

#12

SEREMAKER: BABYMAKIN EXPERT √; +2,187|7040|Mountains of NC

it reminds me a little of this

https://static.bf2s.com/files/user/17445/carhartt.jpg

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