My CV

2008-11-04 14:54:28

#1

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

I'm applying for a couple of jobs tommorow (literally, just seeing if places have any spaces, and handing in my CV if they do) and I just want a couple of opinions on it. The formatting will be fucked, but if you could just read it through and give me some comments it would be cool Cheers guys

CURRICULUM VITAE

Jack Morley
Address Here
Tel: /Email: jak-morley@hotmail.co.uk
D.o.B. – 20th April 1992

I consider myself to be a person who can work under my own initiative when required but I am also very happy working as a team member. I have a flexible approach to working hours, but due to college commitments I am only available on Thursdays, Fridays and Saturdays (this however will change per term, every 12 weeks). I am conscientious and work to a high standard and I am well aware of the importance of deadlines.

Previous Work Experience

Date Company Name Position

Current I am currently at college.

10th July 08 – Htec LTD Temporary Despatch Clerk
26th Sept 08

Education

2008-Present Point Blank London Music College
2003-2008    Brune Park Community College
1996-2003 St. Johns C of E Primary School

Qualifications

GCSEs English Language B
   English Literature B
Science B
Additional Science B
Maths C
French C
Philosophy (AS Level) C
Music Technology Pass
(NCFE Level 2)
RS Short Course D

Interests
I have played guitar for several years, and have a strong interest in almost all genres of music. I also have an interest in gaming, and have played various games online, making friends along the way. I visited a friend from Holland in March 2008. I enjoy films, from Action to Comedy, and socialising with my friends.

References

Mr R Knowles (Music Dpt.) ` Mr A Smith
Address ETC are on both of these

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2008-11-04 15:03:10

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Dauntless: Admin; +2,249|7190|London

It's pretty good I guess, but good luck finding a part time job to fit in with college, a few of my friends have been looking for ages.

btw, your college is right round the corner from my uni

2008-11-04 15:06:35

#3

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

I know, it's gonna be quite hard =/ Especially the fact I want it like a set 3 days that changes every 12 weeks... And really? Where is your uni?

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2008-11-04 15:11:20

#4

.Sup: be nice; +2,646|6901|The Twilight Zone

Good luck

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2008-11-04 15:11:42

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Dauntless: Admin; +2,249|7190|London

Don't give up looking though, I got one and the boss lets me turn up whenever I'm not in a lecture, pays quite good too. And, Angel.

2008-11-04 15:13:19

#6

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

Cheers .Sup. And I have no choice on giving up. I need to spends lots of money and have no money to spend. So it's find one or like.....not get stuff I need. And yayz Angel

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2008-11-04 15:19:04

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Ryan: Member; +1,230|7291|Alberta, Canada

Is that a fake DOB? You're 16 and you are in college?

2008-11-04 15:19:48

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SamTheMan:D: Banned; +856|6422|England

Ryan wrote:
Is that a fake DOB? You're 16 and you are in college?

lolcanada

2008-11-04 15:21:59

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JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

SamTheMan:D wrote:
Ryan wrote:
Is that a fake DOB? You're 16 and you are in college?
lolcanada

Haha, yeh It's the right DOB.

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2008-11-04 15:23:05

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Ryan: Member; +1,230|7291|Alberta, Canada

ShadowsStrike wrote:
SamTheMan:D wrote:
Ryan wrote:
Is that a fake DOB? You're 16 and you are in college?
lolcanada
Haha, yeh It's the right DOB.

That's queer.

2008-11-04 15:24:23

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phishman420: Banned; +821|6129

A few grammar errors here and there.

2008-11-04 15:26:54

#12

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

phishman420 wrote:
A few grammar errors here and there.

American grammar? Or general grammar?

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2008-11-04 15:27:30

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m3thod: All kiiiiiiiiinds of gainz; +2,197|7119|UK

You don't need CURRICULUM VITAE at the top, its obvious what the document it. Stick your name up there.

Use the word 'profile' as a title for the first paragraph.

Remove the primary school bit. Not needed.

Same for Current I am currently at college. The dates should demonstrate this.

Bullet point responsibilities/achievements under experience. Maybe add a sentence or two explaining your job.

Bullet point interests.
- Computing
- Travelling
- Music compositon

You have to be punchy and to the point, you want them to flesh out the points in the interview, so don't give them too much ammo to read and make points on. That's their job when they sit in front of you.

Last edited by m3thod (2008-11-04 15:31:49)

Blackbelts are just whitebelts who have never quit.

2008-11-04 15:28:00

#14

Hurricane2k9: Pendulous Sweaty Balls; +1,538|6150|College Park, MD

Ryan wrote:
ShadowsStrike wrote:
SamTheMan:D wrote:

lolcanada
Haha, yeh It's the right DOB.
That's queer.

college in the UK is basically 12th grade or something like that

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2008-11-04 15:29:42

#15

phishman420: Banned; +821|6129

ShadowsStrike wrote:
phishman420 wrote:
A few grammar errors here and there.
American grammar? Or general grammar?

Just some comma mistakes. Didn't really look too hard at it.

2008-11-04 15:31:15

#16

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

m3thod wrote:
You don't need CURRICULUM VITAE at the top, its obvious what the document it. Stick your name up there.

Use the word 'profile' as a title for the first paragraph.

Remove the primary school bit. Not needed.

Same for Current I am currently at college. The dates should demonstrate this.

Bullet point responsbilities/achievement under experince. Maybe add a sentace or two eaplaining your job.

Bullet point interests.

You have to be punchy and to the point, you want them to flesh out the points in the interview, so don't give them too much ammo to read and make points on. That's their job when they sit in front of you.

Thankyou.

EDIT- Cheers phish

Last edited by ShadowsStrike (2008-11-04 15:32:09)

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2008-11-04 15:33:24

#17

m3thod: All kiiiiiiiiinds of gainz; +2,197|7119|UK

Any language skills?

Blackbelts are just whitebelts who have never quit.

2008-11-04 15:33:44

#18

mkxiii: online bf2s mek evasion; +509|6684|Uk

ShadowsStrike wrote:
I know, it's gonna be quite hard =/ Especially the fact I want it like a set 3 days that changes every 12 weeks... And really? Where is your uni?

dammit, if i was here earlier i could have said "right round the corner from your college"

good CV, never written one myself so wouldnt really know what to comment on

2008-11-04 15:34:30

#19

God Save the Queen: Banned; +628|6791|tropical regions of london

American

2008-11-04 15:36:03

#20

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

m3thod wrote:
Any language skills?

A C in french GCSE..

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2008-11-04 15:37:33

#21

Dauntless: Admin; +2,249|7190|London

mkxiii wrote:
ShadowsStrike wrote:
I know, it's gonna be quite hard =/ Especially the fact I want it like a set 3 days that changes every 12 weeks... And really? Where is your uni?
dammit, if i was here earlier i could have said "right round the corner from your college"

good CV, never written one myself so wouldnt really know what to comment on

You can still say it, go ahead.

2008-11-04 15:38:08

#22

SamTheMan:D: Banned; +856|6422|England

God Save the Queen wrote:
America

sux

2008-11-04 15:38:25

#23

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

Dauntless wrote:
mkxiii wrote:
ShadowsStrike wrote:
I know, it's gonna be quite hard =/ Especially the fact I want it like a set 3 days that changes every 12 weeks... And really? Where is your uni?
dammit, if i was here earlier i could have said "right round the corner from your college"

good CV, never written one myself so wouldnt really know what to comment on
You can still say it, go ahead.

Lulz, tbh Dauntless, I was expecting you to

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2008-11-04 15:38:52

#24

m3thod: All kiiiiiiiiinds of gainz; +2,197|7119|UK

ShadowsStrike wrote:
m3thod wrote:
Any language skills?
A C in french GCSE..

nah that ain't gonna do, if you were a multi lingual you could have had a section for language proficiency.

Blackbelts are just whitebelts who have never quit.

2008-11-04 15:39:28

#25

JakAttaK: csanva<3; +492|6774|England

m3thod wrote:
ShadowsStrike wrote:
m3thod wrote:
Any language skills?
A C in french GCSE..
nah that ain't gonna do, if you were a multi lingual you could have had a section for language proficiency.

Hahah Naa I'm not

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