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2009-04-06 13:04:32
Jebus
Looking for my Scooper
+218|6025|Belgium
Hi all. A few mates and I have decided to make a video for a school project. I just finished editing the intro and I wanted to hear your thoughts on it. I want to hear ALL criticism.

Oh yeah, just one remark, this was filmed with a very crappy camera which overexposed everything.. I managed to alter it a bit but it's still far from perfect. But meh. Any other comments?


pm lol

Mind you, this is only the intro lol.

Last edited by Jebus (2009-04-07 10:05:43)

2009-04-06 13:07:18
Pochsy
Artifice of Eternity
+702|5804|Toronto
Camera shakes too much for me. Get someone with steady hands to do the filming.
The shape of an eye in front of the ocean, digging for stones and throwing them against its window pane. Take it down dreamer, take it down deep. - Other Families
2009-04-06 13:09:46
Jebus
Looking for my Scooper
+218|6025|Belgium

Pochsy wrote:

Camera shakes too much for me. Get someone with steady hands to do the filming.
I guess that's because of the camera.. We had to film with something like this

https://www.recognitionrewards.com/shopping/images/products/thumbs/EasyShareV1003ZoomDigitalCamera.jpg


Thanks for the advice though!
2009-04-06 13:15:31
Runs_with_sciss0rs
Well butter my buscuit
+121|6453|14072
What are you going for here? Are you trying to make a serious film, or one that looks serious, but isn't at all, or just a joke? The kid smiling at :45 makes it look like a joke
2009-04-06 13:18:07
Jebus
Looking for my Scooper
+218|6025|Belgium

Runs_with_sciss0rs wrote:

What are you going for here? Are you trying to make a serious film, or one that looks serious, but isn't at all, or just a joke? The kid smiling at :45 makes it look like a joke
A program that shouldn't be taken seriously at all. Mainly, we're making this video for fun, while still working on a project
2009-04-06 15:14:26
h4hagen
Whats my age again?
+91|6614|Troy, New York
Looks great for a school project.
EDIT: Maybe a bit better thingamabob at the end though instead of the swirl to black.

Last edited by h4hagen (2009-04-06 15:14:46)

2009-04-06 15:24:43
Superior Mind
(not macbeth)
+1,755|6954
I'd say fix the white balance on the camera and re-shoot it.
It was pretty funny, perhaps have the guys move a bit faster, they seemed to be moving slower than the beat of the music.
Not bad overall.

As for the ending transition, try a fade to black.

Last edited by Superior Mind (2009-04-06 15:25:20)

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2009-04-06 15:25:17
=NHB=Shadow
hi
+322|6627|California
haha this is me and my friends video project for spanish

Last edited by =NHB=Shadow (2009-04-06 15:26:49)

 

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