notorious
Nay vee, bay bee.
+1,396|7167|The United Center
Mainly just ramblings I decided to write down...and for some reason I've now decided to share.  As a warning, if you're just going to post pointless drivel (tl;dr as an example, or things similar), you'll be AWMed for spam.  This is your warning.



Anyway,



I lie in the grass in the park and watch the clouds go by. I see birds fly overhead and I wonder if they have any idea what global warming is or how their choices affect their lives. Do they know of life in the countryside? Are they living in this city by choice? Do they care? Or do they just concentrate on not being stepped on by people while they try to find their next meal? I wonder if birds are ignorant because they don't know of the things that are important to people...or if they're better off not knowing. People always use the term "free as a bird"...but...are they?

Sometimes when I'm in the car, I look at people in their cars driving by or sitting at the stoplights, and I wonder how their life is going in their little life-bubble. I wonder where they are going and where they are from. Maybe they are going to a wedding, or a funeral, or to somebody's house. Maybe to a party or driving just to get away from wherever they once were; finally driving out of their bubble or into the place they've always dreamed of going. Everyone has a different story, and I wonder what theirs is and what they are thinking at that very moment.

When on an airplane I look out the window and watch the ground go by. I never think about the people below me. For some reason, as I distance myself from the world, I do precisely that. Not only is my body moving away from the Earth, but my mind is also. The people sitting in traffic on the freeway become nothing to me but motionless little dots along a line on the ground. We need this escape. This ability to forget about life for a while. When you're on that plane, nothing matters. To me, that's an escape. No one can call you in to work a shift when you're at 35,000 feet. During that time, only your destination matters...and that should be a metaphor for life.

Different people find different things important and, while I hold my own list of priorities, sometimes I enjoy reading over the lists of others. It's amazing how intimately you get to know someone by finding out what's important to them. Many people define being intimate with physicality, but I think that couldn't be further from the truth. If I know you have three freckles on your inner thigh, how is that more intimate than knowing what you're willing to sacrifice to achieve your dreams?

People are so concerned about the perceptions of others. I've been a fan of the saying "the people who care don't matter and the people who matter don't care". Do your friends care if you made a bad decision and embarrassed yourself? Or will they be there by your side the entire time? If it's the former, then what kind of friends are they in the first place?

Do birds worry about this?
ATG
Banned
+5,233|6949|Global Command

RUSH, Out Of The Cradle wrote:

It's not a place
It's a yearning
It's not a race
It's a journey

It's not an act
It's attraction
It's not a style
It's an action

It's a dream for the waking
It's a flower touched by flame
It's a gift for the giving
It's a power with a hundred names

Surge of energy, spark of inspiration
The breath of love is electricity
Maybe time is bird in flight
Endlessly mocking
Here we come out of the cradle
Endlessly rocking
Endlessly rocking

It's a hand
That rocks the cradle
It's a motion
That swings the sky
It's method on the edge of madness
It's a balance on the edge of a knife
It's a smile on the edge of sadness
It's a dance on the edge of life

Endlessly rocking
Zombie_Affair
Amputee's...BOOP
+78|6236|Fattest Country in the world.
Needless to say I have some unusual habits, yet all these socially acceptable people can't wait to pick up hammers and smash their food to bits. Normal people are so hostile.
KuSTaV
noice
+947|6932|Gold Coast

Zombie_Affair wrote:

Needless to say I have some unusual habits, yet all these socially acceptable people can't wait to pick up hammers and smash their food to bits. Normal people are so hostile.
What defines normal?
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Zombie_Affair
Amputee's...BOOP
+78|6236|Fattest Country in the world.
conforming with or constituting a norm or standard or level or type or social norm; not abnormal; "serve wine at normal room temperature"; "normal ...

in accordance with scientific laws

being approximately average or within certain limits in e.g. intelligence and development; "a perfectly normal child"; "of normal intelligence"; "the most normal person I've ever met"
VicktorVauhn
Member
+319|6812|Southern California

KuSTaV wrote:

Zombie_Affair wrote:

Needless to say I have some unusual habits, yet all these socially acceptable people can't wait to pick up hammers and smash their food to bits. Normal people are so hostile.
What defines normal?
Normal people do.

I gotta say.... Good job for trying... But what I could make it through was the hugest cliche piece of faux artistic wanna be individualism ever.
Sorry, but its just so amazingly unoriginal that it was painful to read.

Can I just ask... Is the author between 17 and 19?
AussieReaper
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
+5,761|6573|what

KuSTaV wrote:

What defines normal?
The popular people do, nerd.
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ATG
Banned
+5,233|6949|Global Command

Zombie_Affair wrote:

Needless to say I have some unusual habits, yet all these socially acceptable people can't wait to pick up hammers and smash their food to bits. Normal people are so hostile.
I'm confused. Where did that occur in the OP?

Was it just a random thought, er wat?
Macbeth
Banned
+2,444|6006

notorious wrote:

Do birds worry about this?
I think birds lack the higher level of thinking that humans have and are incapable of worrying.
Zombie_Affair
Amputee's...BOOP
+78|6236|Fattest Country in the world.

ATG wrote:

Zombie_Affair wrote:

Needless to say I have some unusual habits, yet all these socially acceptable people can't wait to pick up hammers and smash their food to bits. Normal people are so hostile.
I'm confused. Where did that occur in the OP?

Was it just a random thought, er wat?
Just a quote that reminded me of the OP, he sort of went on this tangent about thinking what everyone else is doing and what their purpose is, similar to the quote.
jsnipy
...
+3,277|6943|...

Reminds me of some poetry. Fortunately there is a reading on youtube.

Last edited by jsnipy (2009-08-16 20:30:14)

Ty
Mass Media Casualty
+2,398|7195|Noizyland

My critisism would be that it seems too forced, like a high school creative writing project. It's probably just its nature as a short piece of writing but I think you can do better if you actually write what and how you want rather than conforming to the "cliche, faux artistic wanna be individualism" style that VicktorVauhn mentions.

This is good as a writing exercise but I'm sure you can do better.
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notorious
Nay vee, bay bee.
+1,396|7167|The United Center

Macbeth wrote:

notorious wrote:

Do birds worry about this?
I think birds lack the higher level of thinking that humans have and are incapable of worrying.
It's not meant to be taken seriously.
Gooners
Wiki Contributor
+2,700|7053

notorious wrote:

Macbeth wrote:

notorious wrote:

Do birds worry about this?
I think birds lack the higher level of thinking that humans have and are incapable of worrying.
It's not meant to be taken seriously.
Neither is Macbeth.
VicktorVauhn
Member
+319|6812|Southern California

Gooners wrote:

notorious wrote:

Macbeth wrote:


I think birds lack the higher level of thinking that humans have and are incapable of worrying.
It's not meant to be taken seriously.
Neither is Macbeth.
ZING!
Macbeth
Banned
+2,444|6006

VicktorVauhn wrote:

Gooners wrote:

notorious wrote:


It's not meant to be taken seriously.
Neither is Macbeth.
ZING!
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