Thank you for the comments!
What I tend to do is try to correct the mistakes I made in the past to make the next project even better (While trying out new ideas)..
Some of the past comments on ambush at mashtuur (Nametags, short, basic story) have been addressed, and so far i have considered the comments on "Its too fast to read" about the ending..
So if anyone does have anymore comments, feel free to say them!
What I tend to do is try to correct the mistakes I made in the past to make the next project even better (While trying out new ideas)..
Some of the past comments on ambush at mashtuur (Nametags, short, basic story) have been addressed, and so far i have considered the comments on "Its too fast to read" about the ending..
So if anyone does have anymore comments, feel free to say them!